My sentence choice-"Demand for gasoline is expected to increase over the years, but not by as much as previously predicted, because of higher prices."
1) Wednesday, Oct 3, 2007
2) The Seattle Times: http://seattletimes.nwsource.com/html/localnews/2003923842_gastax04m.html
3)It has a friendboy" in the middle and at the end of the sentence.
4)I like the complex sentence structure such as"....,but...,because of ..."
5) My new sentence: Demand for power is expected to be used up after 100 years, but not by as much as endlessly consumpted, because of the limitation of recourses
Thursday, October 4, 2007
Wednesday, October 3, 2007
assignment 1: sentence
My sentence choice:"Police accuse Gillihan of hiding the gun he used to shoot the girl and then trying to cover his tracks by sending text messages to people at the party they attended that evening, telling them to lie to police and say he and the girl had been at the party all night."
1) Tuesday, October,2007
2) The Seattle Times http://seattletimes.nwsource.com/html/localnews/2003918025_girlraped02m.html
3) The writer uses to manipulate sequentially lots of relative clause in a sentence , collective word "and" to sort the circumstances and time periods out how the case happened , and he ,in the mean time, uses the passive voice to explain literally what the details in the case was.
4)This sentence is my favor as the writer using the tremendous relative clause effectively in the sentences and express how the story occurred radically .
5)My sentence : The principle approves the request of student committee of processing the soccer competition and trying to hold the other competitions by announcing the notices to students at the broad they haunted, telling them to join the competitions and enjoy the process they participate
1) Tuesday, October,2007
2) The Seattle Times http://seattletimes.nwsource.com/html/localnews/2003918025_girlraped02m.html
3) The writer uses to manipulate sequentially lots of relative clause in a sentence , collective word "and" to sort the circumstances and time periods out how the case happened , and he ,in the mean time, uses the passive voice to explain literally what the details in the case was.
4)This sentence is my favor as the writer using the tremendous relative clause effectively in the sentences and express how the story occurred radically .
5)My sentence : The principle approves the request of student committee of processing the soccer competition and trying to hold the other competitions by announcing the notices to students at the broad they haunted, telling them to join the competitions and enjoy the process they participate
Subscribe to:
Comments (Atom)
